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Check out mine too!
For the colors I would propably ahve gone for more orange or red-ish choices but ok.
I really like the Ornament flair from the tails.
The main problem I see on this design is the composition.
Overall you could make the shape moe interesting, for example by loosening up the tails ans make them a little more seperate.
The other thin would be the fox only beeing placed within the box created by the lines behind him which takes away dynamic and makes it looked a little cramped.
You can solve this by making stuff cross each other, like you did with one paw there.
Still, I really like this one, it just need some tweaking.
Please check out my design and vote(if you like it) : [link]